Funny Gluten Free Celiac Disease Awareness Pasta T-shirt

I wanted to like this, but for an action/adventure story it so often dragged for me. Perhaps it can be tightened up before publication. I like description, especially if it moves the story along, but if the description is dragging down an action scene, get rid of it. It only slows things down. For instance, a character steals a car from a strip mall and they make their Funny Gluten Free Celiac Disease Awareness Pasta T-Shirt escape. But all the stores and restaurants in the strip mall are listed. Why? That has nothing to do with the theft or escape. It only slows the action down. We know what strip malls look like, we don’t need to know what’s in one if it has nothing to do with the plot. Oh, another place was when the protagonist stopped at a rundown motel. There are three pages of the motel owner and her daughter bickering at each other. They are minor characters but three pages are given over to their bickering. This could be a much better book with better editing. There’s some fat that can be trimmed. Thank you to the publisher and Netgalley for allowing me to read this digital ARC of Sorrowland
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• 100% Combed ring-spun cotton (heather gray color is 90% cotton/10% polyester, light heather gray is 98% cotton/2% polyester, heather black is 50% cotton/50% polyester) | Fabric Weight: 5.0 oz (mid-weight)
• Double-stitched seams at shoulder, sleeve, collar, and waist
• Special Note: Mineral Wash colors have a slight yellow tint and not one is the same due to the special dye process
• Imported; processed and printed in the U.S.A. Worldwide shipping.
• Care instructions: Machine wash: cold (max 30C or 90F); Do not bleach; Tumble dry: low heat; Iron, steam or dry: low heat; Do not dry clean

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